Question

Scene. Put a check next to any correct sentences. Then edit the

The following sentences appeared in students' essays described
Exercise 1
incorrect sentences and write a correct version for each one
The sun is shining.
Several clouds are in the sky.
Two people are walking slowly and quietly.
Splashing through the shallow water.
They are probably very happy.
You can imagine walking on the white glittering sand.
There is a big palm tree.
Some shells are on the sand.
It is a beach on the island of Maui in the Hawaiian Islands.
There are no umbrellas to provide shade from the sun.
On that beach, two people are enjoying the beautiful weather.
a) Check the correct sentences.
b) Edit the incorrect sentences.
c) Provide the correct version for each.
d) Identify the incorrect statements.

Answer 1

The correct sentences are: the sun is shining, several clouds are in the sky, two people are walking slowly and quietly, they are probably very happy, you can imagine walking on the white glittering sand, there is a big palm tree, some shells are on the sand, and on that beach, two people are enjoying the beautiful weather. The incorrect sentences are: splashing through the shallow water, it is a beach on the island of Maui in the Hawaiian Islands, and there are no umbrellas to provide shade from the sun. The correct versions of the incorrect sentences are: they are splashing through the shallow water, it is a beach on the island of Maui in Hawaii, and there are no umbrellas to provide shade from the sun on that beach.

Step-by-step explanation:

The correct sentences in the given passage are as follows:

1. The sun is shining.
2. Several clouds are in the sky.
3. Two people are walking slowly and quietly.
4. They are probably very happy.
5. You can imagine walking on the white glittering sand.
6. There is a big palm tree.
7. Some shells are on the sand.
8. On that beach, two people are enjoying the beautiful weather.

The incorrect sentences are:

1. Splashing through the shallow water.
2. It is a beach on the island of Maui in the Hawaiian Islands.
3. There are no umbrellas to provide shade from the sun.

The correct versions of the incorrect sentences are:

1. They are splashing through the shallow water.
2. It is a beach on the island of Maui in Hawaii.
3. There are no umbrellas to provide shade from the sun on that beach.