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I’m writing an argumentative essay on both stories “The Great Gatsby” and “Federigo’s Falcon.” The question stating (Can money buy happiness?) and I’m not looking for answers I just need to know if my intro paragraph looks good.

I’m writing an argumentative essay on both stories “The Great Gatsby” and “Federigo-example-1

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It looks good to me i’m in 10th
User Babak Abadkheir
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Answer:

A few fixes within my explanation.

Step-by-step explanation:

"Money can't buy happiness" is a common saying that many believe is true. The saying means that there is more to your life than fame, wealth, and luxury. The Great Gatspy and Federigo's Falcon both compare this saying. Within each story, we encounter both good and bad qualities from both and we learn that money cannot buy happiness from their respective struggles.

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