Question

Is there anyway to make my email more convincing? I really want a schedule change so I am emailing my vice principal but I’ve heard many kids failed request a change… The scribbled parts are just names

Answer 1

I think it is quite convincing. Your email is clear, respectful, reasonable and the fact that you added how you are willing to exceed makes it seem more convincing because shows that you are responsible.

Try to make sure your grammar is correct because that will show that you are committed since you can write a good email.

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I hope this helps!