Question

On a comfortless, somber night as rain pounded against the

windows, Victor walked through the dark corridor as a sense of
misery clouded him. Entering his lab he knew the duties that he
had to fulfill. He hastily prepared his materials, not knowing wha
to expect for the night ahead. As he gazed at the lifeless body c
the female companion, he began the finishing touches. Once
Victor knew she was ready, he attached bolts along her body
aligning them horizontally. With a big gulp, his voice rang
throughout the room, "READY". Henry took the cue and
proceeded to pull the lever. Electricity flowed throughout the
female companion's body, violent spasms began to unfold from
her.

can you make this grammatically correct?

Answer 1

The passage has been revised to correct grammatical issues, resulting in a clearer and more concise narrative of Victor's actions on a stormy night in his laboratory.

Step-by-step explanation:

On a comfortless, somber night with rain pounding against the windows, Victor walked through the dark corridor, shrouded in a sense of misery. Upon entering his lab, he knew the duties he was obligated to fulfill. Hastily, he prepared his materials, unaware of what the night ahead would hold. As he gazed upon the lifeless body of the female companion, he began to add the finishing touches.

Once assured of her readiness, he attached bolts along her body, aligning them horizontally. Taking a deep breath, his voice echoed through the room, "READY". Henry, understanding his cue, proceeded to pull the lever. Electricity surged through the female companion's body, causing violent spasms to unfold.