Question

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Writing Topic : Overcoming Childhood Fear

Instructions:

1) Write TWO paragraphs about "Overcoming Childhood Fear" into the text box below. The word "overcome" means "to succeed in dealing with a difficulty or solving a problem." The word "fear" means "feeling afraid."

2) Write at least 8 sentences in each paragraph. This means you need to write at least 16 sentences for this test. If you write less than 16 sentences for this test, you fail the test.

You should write about most of the ideas below in your writing.

1) What do you think most children afraid of? Is it normal for children to feel scared and why do you think so? How about you when you were a kid?

2) What were you scared of or worried about when you were a child? Describe the experience of such fear. What happened? When and where did it happen?

3) Describe how you overcame the fear.

4) What did you learn from this experience of overcoming fear?

When you finish, check if you

write two paragraphs with topic sentences, sufficient, relevant and clear details, and conclusion sentences
use at least 5 appropriate transition words or phrases between sentences
use gerunds as a subject for at least 2 sentences
use a variety of sentence structures: at least 3 compound and 3 complex sentences ( at least one complex sentence should have an adjective clause in it.)
use correct spellings, punctuations, sentence structures and grammar
use more level 3 vocabulary
use correct paragraph format with names, date, a topic, and indent

Answer 1

to start, Kids are just jitterish from the start. So yes, it is normal to feel fear as a kid. I think most kids are too immature to understand fear usually. (maybe 3-7 year olds.) But it still happens. When i was a kid I used to worry about my families safety. Its a big thing kids worry about. I was worried that i would accidentally sleep on my hound when i was getting from school. If your scared as a kid you usually get comforted by your parents. Usually the mom since dads are typically not too well with sad or emotional children. I am definitely a worry worm for my family. When i was around 7 or 8 my mother broke her ankle at a party when we were celebrating July 4th. It was horrible. I couldnt do enough for her, I felt like I wasn't good enough for her. I Could not sleep knowing that she was uncomfortable. Soon enough I realized that i shouldn't worry. And that she was in good hands. I also noticed that it wouldnt do any good to worry about her as she was already stressed. When she came home, she was all better. I learned to trust the hospital as they have all the knowledge they need to take care of everybody.