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Edit the following statement to correct the error.

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Final answer:

The statement was edited to correct punctuation, ensuring clarity by separating independent clauses with a semicolon and following the transitional phrase with a comma.

Step-by-step explanation:

To correct the error in the statement, the punctuation must be revised for clarity. The edited sentence should be:

"Today, legislation controls organ-donation policies and procedures; indeed, organ and tissue donation is becoming one of the most regulated fields within health care."

This correction provides a semicolon to separate the two independent clauses and a comma to follow the transitional phrase 'indeed,' improving the readability and coherence of the statement.

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