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I bought a new computer yesterday, and I spent most of the evening setting it up. It is a laptop designed specifically for gaming, I love to game, but I don't like to play on a computer that lags. Therefore, I decided to save up my money to get the perfect machine. Now that I have it in my possession, I can't wait to get started!

Which of the following is a correction for the run-on sentence in the paragraph?

A) It is a laptop designed specifically for gaming. I love to game, but I don't like to play on a computer that lags.
B) I don't like to play on a computer that lags, I decided to save up my money to get the perfect machine.
C) Therefore, I decided to save up my money to get the perfect machine, now that I have it in my possession, I can't wait to get started!
D) Now that I have it in my possession. I can't wait to get started!

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Answer:

the answer is A.

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