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ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF

WEARING SCHOOL UNIFORM


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School Uniform is basically a dress code that you wear to school. It is different in each and every school. Every school has a Dress code. School Uniforms can be beautiful, colorful, formal, etc. Wearing school uniform can have many physical and mental effects on students. Wearing school uniform will create a sense of equality in school. Studies have shown that studying while wearing school uniforms can give the student, more focus to study. Wearing school uniform will allow the students to be more formal and learn to wear what dress at a particular event or time or place. Although there are many advantages for wearing school uniforms, there are many disadvantages as well. School Uniforms are often very costly and some parents cannot afford to buy the school uniform. Also for some students, this idea won’t be good if they are interested in Fashion, arts, etc. So to sum up wearing school uniforms has many advantages as well as disadvantages.

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Answer 1

It looks fine, but I would add in that if a student wore a uniform it could affect their mental health in a negative way of they use clothing to express themselves. It could possibly put them in a depression mental state. But other than that, it's quite good.