Question

Pls help don’t be rude and just say random stuff 25 points!!!

Summarize the passage below in at least two or three sentences. Then evaluate the passage, focusing
on the quality of the details included. Which portions of the passage do not provide enough detail to
help the reader understand the topic? Why? After you have evaluated the passage, revise it to
improve the quality of its details. In your revision, show which parts of the original paragraph you are
using by underlining them. Note: You may need to make up information to add to the paragraph. (15
points)
"Consumer Risk: Buddy Blocks"
A new product on the market, Buddy Blocks, poses serious risks to children. The blocks can break
easily and hurt children. Some children have even had to be hospitalized. The paint used on the blocks
is also unsafe. It has caused illness in several young children. There is one age group of children who
should especially avoid playing with these blocks. The national consumer product panel is considering
removing this toy from the market because of the problems it has caused.

Answer 1

Step-by-step explanation:

why hospitalized? choking? poisoning?

what age group should avoid this product under 2?

what is wrong with the paint? doors it contain lead? does it chip?

these are needed because they help the reader understand the risks.

example rewrite:

"Consumer Risk: Buddy Blocks"

A new product on the market, Buddy Blocks, poses serious risks to children. The blocks can break

easily causing a choking hazzard. Some children have even had to be hospitalized. The paint used on the blocks

is also unsafe as it contains high levels of lead. It has caused illness in several young children. children under the age of 2 should especially avoid playing with these blocks. The national consumer product panel is considering

removing this toy from the market because of the problems it has caused.