Question

For english we have to submit a poem to a poem contest is this poem good enough to win? please give your thoughts and opinions

I never once thought I would sit here broken by words I never thought I would hear again,
I never thought I would have all of my pain ingrained.
My skin scarred with my mistakes and the pain of my life.
But I was the one who struck the knife.
I could end it now and make the pain end.
But then the pain wouldn’t blend.
Would I leave them blind?
Would they actually care for once after I have left them behind?
Am I evil to want just a bit of relief?
Would they be in disbelief?
But no the pain’s eating at me I can’t stay.
I just want my soul to be swayed.
~MJA

Answer 1

Step-by-step explanation:

ight it sounds depressing but relatable ill say its 10/10

Answer 2

You did very great honestly I don't have any opions I love how you wrote it. Good luck!