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Spring is my favourite time of year. I love watching people playing in the park. I love to see the flowers bloom. But, most of all. I love that it is warm outside and that the snow is gone. My sister and I like to play in the backyard. We take our dog for walks. Sometimes, we hang out with the kids next door.

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I always look forwards to the springtime, the cold winds are gone and the sun awakens from it's hibernation. The flowers start to bloom and the snow is melting. The children go to the parks for spring-time fun. Even my dog, Fluffy, enjoys playing outside without the snow in the way. My sister, Macy, and i enjoy playing in the backyard with the warmer weather. The kids next door, Sarah and Jamie come over to our house to enjoy the warmer weather together.

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