Question

A. Re-write the passage below by correcting the faults in the sentences

At the dinner yesterday, most of my family members selected a lunch from the menu that was
high in sugar. Hungry after two hours of hiking, my packed sandwich was quickly devoured
upon sitting by the table. Then, out of nowhere, people started trouping into the house. Because
of our maid. She has always been very ineffective. Her main duties were answering phone calls,
file records, and to conduct visitor surveys. I wish I was the man of the house, I would have
sacked her.

Answer 1

Yesterday at dinner, most of my family members selected a lunch from the menu that was high in sugar. So, I decided to devour my packed sandwich which I had taken for hiking. Suddenly, out of nowhere, people started trouping into the house. It was because of our maid. She has always been very ineffective in her duties of answering phone calls, filing records, and conducting visitor surveys. If I was the man of the house, she would have got sacked a long time ago.