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I really need to find a serious editor, but I need help with this. Does it sound right? Does it have enough emotion?

I really need to find a serious editor, but I need help with this. Does it sound right-example-1

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I would love to edit it for you, I would take it on very seriously. As far as emotion goes, you did excellent. A few mechanical kinks and it’s good.
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