Final answer:
The revised compound sentence enhances the original by adding descriptive language that emphasizes the sensory details of both sight and smell, creating a vivid picture of a garden full of flowers with a fragrance in the air.
Step-by-step explanation:
The sentence to be rewritten using a correct compound expression is 'The garden was full of flowers and there was a fragrance in the air.' A compound sentence typically combines two independent clauses connected by a conjunction (such as 'and', 'but', or 'or'), a semicolon, or a colon.
Compound sentences often show a relationship between the ideas in these clauses. To create a more vivid and descriptive compound sentence, we can combine and enhance elements from the provided sentences, for example:
'The garden, brimming with flowers, exuded a fragrance that permeated the air, reminiscent of the aromatic mood set by the herb garden's invisible incense.'
This revised sentence uses descriptive language and compound elements to provide both imagery and an enhanced sense of the atmosphere. This approach to rewriting emphasizes sensory details and effectively joins the visual abundance of flowers with the olfactory impact of their scent, thus accurately portraying the lush setting.