To add detail to the paragraph, we can include adjectival or adverbial phrases in certain sentences. These phrases provide visual and descriptive details, making the paragraph more engaging and informative.
To add more detail to the paragraph, we can include adjectival or adverbial phrases. Let's start with the first sentence: 'House plants have many benefits.' We can add an adverbial phrase to make it more descriptive, such as 'House plants, with their vibrant green leaves and delicate flowers, have many benefits.' This phrase provides visual details about the appearance of the plants.
Next, let's look at the third sentence: 'They also keep the air temperature down.' To add more interest, we can use an adverbial phrase like 'They efficiently regulate the air temperature, keeping it pleasantly cool.' This phrase adds information about how the plants impact the air temperature.
In the seventh sentence, we can include an adjectival phrase: 'If you want to incorporate plants into your home, but are unsure about how to care for them, you could buy a cactus or succulent.' We can make it more engaging by saying 'If you want to incorporate beautiful and low-maintenance plants into your home, but are unsure about how to care for them, you could buy a stunning cactus or succulent.' This phrase adds visual details and emphasizes the beauty of the plants.
Finally, let's enhance the last sentence: 'This makes them a good plant for people who have little time.' We can include an adjectival phrase and say 'This makes them a perfect choice for busy individuals who have little time to spare.' The phrase 'perfect choice for busy individuals' emphasizes the suitability of these plants for people with limited time.