Question

I wrote this for english today... Is it good?

Depression is grey
It sounds like someone hiding and crying in the bathroom
It smells like blood on the floor
It tastes like vinegar on your tongue
It looks like putting a fake smile on your face to make others happy
It feels like no one wants you around

Answer 1

10/10 but might be too violent 4 school

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Answer 2

Wow that's really good! 10/10. I hope your teacher will give you a good grade on it :)