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A student's assignment asked, "Imagine you have been assigned to write an opinion

essay that challenges the thesis of "Video games are social spaces for today's
generation." Write your counterargument in one or two sentences."
The student answered, "Online video games can also have a harmful effect on
players. Without moderation, can lead to problems like addiction and depressions."
Unfortunately, their answer contains a sentence fragment. In the space provided,
write a corrected version of the student's answer.

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“Online video games can also have a harmful effect on players. Without moderation, they can lead to problems like addiction and depression.”


what a strange question

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