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What else can I add to this sentence I need help guys it’s my essay !!

What else can I add to this sentence I need help guys it’s my essay !!-example-1
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Answer: maybe you could try breaking up that sentence a little more instead because that makes it seem like a really long sentence. Also, we could be working, doing sports, and being active. That way you are correctly using punctuations. Lastly, don’t forget to fix that word with the red line underneath.

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hope this helps a little.

User Ruzbeh Irani
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Answer: hello ¡

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