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I want to know if this is a good summary for "The Terror"

My summary- Junot, an immigrant, moved to the United States with his mom and his brother which meant that he would go to a new school. His life wasn't already good since his classmates called him names and he was getting bullied by his neighbors. This caused an intense fear for him which he struggled for a long time. This fear caused him to avoid the neighbors and even if they were not around. This continued on until he was a sophomore in high school when he decided to face his fears.

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I want to know if this is a good summary for "The Terror" My summary- Junot-example-1
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It looks alright but there are some slight grammatical errors other than that it looks good
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thats a really good summary but u could check ur grammar and use more complex words

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