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I'm pleased to inform you that our Christmas Party will take place on December 20th, starting at noon in the Belsito room at: Carlo’s Restaurant. We’ll have a small band playing traditional carols: (so feel free to sing along), and don’t be alarmed if the boss shows up dressed as Santa Claus to dish out the end of year awards and bonuses! The mains will be as follows salmon in a hollandaise sauce; traditional roast beef and winter veg; turkey with all the trimmings; and a vegetarian option (TBD). The subsidised cost is £15 per person. If you would like to come, please return this form: to me and indicate your choices below.

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I’m pleased to inform you that our Christmas Party will take place on December 20th, starting at noon in the Belsito room at Carlo’s Restaurant. We’ll have a small band playing traditional carols (so feel free to sing along), and don’t be alarmed if the boss shows up dressed as Santa Claus to dish out the end of year awards and bonuses! The mains will be as follows: salmon in a hollandaise sauce; traditional roast beef and winter veg; turkey with all the trimmings; and a vegetarian option (TBD). The subsidised cost is £15 per person. If you would like to come, please return this form to me and indicate your choices below.

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