Question

Read the sentence from the passage.

"They do not wear uniforms to kinda look cute and sweet."
What would be a good way to change this sentence so that readers will understand what Elena means?
A) They do not wear uniforms because they look kind and good in them.
B) They do not wear uniforms just so that they can look good.
C) They do not wear uniforms so that they can look cute in them.
D) They do not wear uniforms because they need to look sweet to win the game.

Answer 1

The clearest revision of Elena's statement is, 'They do not wear uniforms just so that they can look good,' which focuses on the aesthetic aspect without additional assumptions.

Step-by-step explanation:

The goal is to revise the sentence, "They do not wear uniforms to kinda look cute and sweet," so that the meaning of Elena's statement is clearer to readers. The best option among the provided choices for conveying Elena's likely intent, without including any assumptions about the purpose of wearing uniforms, such as for winning games, is:

B) They do not wear uniforms just so that they can look good.

This revision keeps the focus on the aesthetic aspect of wearing uniforms without assuming additional intentions.