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Select the correct text in the passage

Which sentence in the passage should be revised for clarity?
The following is an excerpt from a studentessa
Daylight Saving Time
(1) Daylight saving time is the system of sendok one hour ahead so that both sunrise and sunset happen at a later
hour(e) The result is an extra hour of daylight in the evening (a) te ist mentioned the idea of daylight Saving benjamin
Franklin, in an essay he jokingly wrote in 17 (4) Anush builder, William Willett wrote seriously about the idea in 1907
(5) Dansaviy time has been used in the United States and in many European countries since World War (0) The
system bertan as a way to conserve the fuel needed to produce electric power (%) since their was an extra hour of daylightin
the evening homes and businesses did not have to turn on the lights as early (6) some places in the United States went back
to standard time after the war, but others Repedaylight saving time

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Final answer:

The sentence that should be revised for clarity in the passage is sentence (6). After the war, some places in the United States switched back to standard time, while others continued with daylight saving time.

Step-by-step explanation:

The sentence in the passage that should be revised for clarity is sentence (6): some places in the United States went back to standard time after the war, but others Repedaylight saving time.

This sentence is unclear and appears to have a typographical error with the word 'Repedaylight'.

A revised and clearer version of the sentence could be: After the war, some places in the United States switched back to standard time, while others continued with daylight saving time.

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