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Does this make sense?

Does this make sense?-example-1
User Rafael
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Answer:

Yes, but you have a bit of grammar mistakes.

Step-by-step explanation:

Mount. Vesuvius were an African boundary....

User Denispyr
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Makes sense to me but I would try and add another sentence in the middle to smooth it out some

User Kaly
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