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The writer could best revise the passage to make it
stronger by
1-adding a claim about the dangers of travel.
2-adding a thesis to introduce the topic of cows.
3-adding a quotation from Hughes about the events.
4-adding a summary of the details using different
words.

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Answer:

I would pick either 1 or 4. You could pick one of those if you would like

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