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Read the paragraph.

Even though my life is very busy, I spend as much time as I can with my family. I often ask
my dad, who is an excellent athlete, to play soccer with me. I also enjoy taking walks, baking
desserts, and playing cards with my mom. However, nothing is better than watching movies
with my loyal, black cat, Max.
6. Which sentence from the paragraph has been revised correctly? (1 point)
Even though, my life is very busy, I spend as much time as I can with my family
OI often ask my dad who is an excellent athlete, to play soccer with me.
I also enjoy taking walks, baking desserts, and playing cards, with my mom.
However, nothing is better than watching movies with my loy black cat, Max,

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Answer:

However, nothing is better than watching movies with my loyal black cat,Max.

^^^ that is the answer.

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