Final answer:
The student's text can be divided into proper paragraphs by identifying shifts in the subject or new actions and dialogue. This division helps to clarify the narrative and improve readability.
Step-by-step explanation:
To separate the given text into proper paragraphs, we should look for natural breaks where the subject shifts or where new actions or dialogue occur. Here is how the text could be divided:
A) "M-Mr. Jacks!" Kate was overjoyed, seeing Mr. Jacks. She could tell he was just as happy as she was, but through that, she saw that he was a little worried.
B) "Mr. Jacks?" Kate questioned. Mr. Jacks responded with a quick, hm. "Are you alright? You seem a bit upset." Kate tried to comfort him.
C) Mr. Jacks seemed surprised by the question but answered, "I could not get my dog across the force field." She peered back and saw the small bulldog whining, still inside the field, reminding her of her mission to get back to her family.
D) She then looked back at Mr. Jacks, but instead of seeing the worried expression he previously wore she, was met with a determined one. With this, she knew that they were ready. She looked back one last time before they started their way towards the small city in the distance.