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Read the run-on sentence. Justin rushed through the obstacle course he couldn't make it over the final obstacle in time. What is the best way to revise the sentence?

User Hitesh Modha
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Answer:

Justin rushed through the obstacle but, he couldn't make it over the final obstacle in time.

Step-by-step explanation:

Just add a conjunction to run on sentences.

User Dan Ports
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The best way to fix a run-on sentence is to add a comma, conjunction, or period. In this case, separating the sentence into 2 with a period is the best option:

Justin rushed through the obstacle course. He couldn't make it over the final obstacle in time.

Hope this helps! Good luck! :)

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