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Which alternative for the words in bold letters makes the sentence most effective?

1. While he shouted loudly
2. Shouting loud
3. No change is needed.

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Final answer:

No change is needed.

Step-by-step explanation:

The alternative that makes the sentence most effective is No change is needed. The original phrase 'While he shouted loudly' is grammatically correct and effectively conveys the meaning. The other option, 'Shouting loud', is a sentence fragment and does not convey a complete thought.

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