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Hello UWC ISAK Japan, my name is sara sadeq, your applicant from palestine. A country in the middle east. I turned 14 on the 21st of august 2023. Today in this video i will be showing you 2 of my most favourite items. In the first place comes this necklace which had 2 pendants on it. The first one is from my mom, she desined it and gave it to a jewel maker to make it. And then she gave it to me when I was in 4th grade abd i have been wearing it ever since. It hasmy name written in arabic which is my native language. This necklace just makes me feel confident and be assured that my mom is always there for me wherever she was. Whilst the other pendant is my grandma’s from my dad’s side of family who had passed away on 7th of october 2023, before she passed away she gave this necklace as a memmorial of her enamord love for me. It means a lot to me for the fact that I dont have anything left of her except for this necklace so it always reminds me of her.

The second item that I will always chisel in my heart is a simple short story I wrote with my best friend of 7 years of friendship. Eventhough the story might not be as great as the ones sold in libraries and book markets, however it retains my favourite memmories with her as we enjoyed our time comming up with the bestest of ideas for this story and drawing its cover page.

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Hello UWC ISAK Japan, I'm Sara Sadeq, an applicant from Palestine, a country in the Middle East. I recently turned 14 on August 21, 2023. In this video, I'll share two of my most cherished items.

Firstly, there's this necklace adorned with two pendants. The first pendant, designed by my mom, holds a special place in my heart. She crafted it and gifted it to me during my 4th-grade year. It features my name written in Arabic, my native language. Wearing it brings me confidence and a constant reminder of my mom's unwavering support. The other pendant belonged to my late grandma from my dad's side, who passed away on October 7, 2023. It's a cherished memento of her boundless love for me, as it's the only tangible thing I have left from her. This necklace always keeps her close in my thoughts.

The second item etched deeply in my heart is a simple short story penned with my best friend of seven years. While it might not rival those found in libraries or book markets, it encapsulates our fondest memories together. Crafting this story was a delightful journey, filled with shared ideas and moments spent joyfully sketching its cover page.