Question

Which sentence correctly revises this sentence? My friend is a great

athlete he won the big game last night.
one:
Great athlete he won the game last night.
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Because he is a great athlete.
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My friend is a great athlete, he won the game last night.
My friend is a great athlete; he won the game last night.

Answer 1

The correct revision of the sentence is: 'My friend is a great athlete; he won the game last night.'

Step-by-step explanation:

The correct sentence revision is: My friend is a great athlete; he won the game last night. This sentence uses a semicolon to separate the two independent clauses and maintain the logical connection between them. It ensures that both ideas are grammatically correct and that the sentence is properly punctuated.

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