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Se has ever replicated what he has done (Morrey 43).

Student excerpt B
Although "there will probably always be a dispute" about who was the best American architect,
"history [may] prove" that Frank Lloyd Wright was the best, according to Edward Morrey (43).
Wright's designs are so "new" that no one has been able to "capture his vision."
A uses the material more effectively, because this material is well-suited to being
paraphrased, and because B employs quotes in a choppy, hard-to-read manner.
B uses the material more effectively, because direct quotes are always superior to
paraphrasing.
A uses the material more effectively, because it is not appropriate to combine quoted
phrases with paraphrased ones, and A sticks wholly to paraphrasing.
B uses the material more effectively, because the combination of quoted phrases with
paraphrased ones allows readers to compare the original author's words with what the
student has written.

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Final answer:

Student A uses the material more effectively because it is well-suited to being paraphrased, while Student B uses the material more effectively by combining quoted phrases and paraphrased ones.


Step-by-step explanation:

The subject of this question is English.

Student A uses the material more effectively because this material is well-suited to being paraphrased, and because A employs quotes in a choppy, hard-to-read manner.

Student B uses the material more effectively because the combination of quoted phrases with paraphrased ones allows readers to compare the original author's words with what the student has written.


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