Question

Read this example of incorrect sentence structure.

Paula is moving to Chicago, winters are cold there.
Which revision best corrects the sentence?
Paula is moving to Chicago winters are cold there.
Paula is moving to Chicago, where winters are cold.
Paula is moving to Chicago, so winters are cold there.
Paula is moving to Chicago; however, winters are cold there.
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Answer 1

The sentence should be revised to 'Paula is moving to Chicago, where winters are cold.'

Step-by-step explanation:

The revision that best corrects the sentence is: Paula is moving to Chicago, where winters are cold. This revision fixes the sentence structure by adding a comma to separate the clauses and includes the word 'where' to properly introduce the second clause that describes the location of Chicago.

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