Question

Rewrite the following passage for sentence variety. Use at least one compound, complex, or compound-complex sentence in your revision. Passage Last night I got dressed for a costume party. I put my tights on, and then my dress. I put my cape on. I put my mask on. I looked in the mirror. A character from my favorite comic movie looked back at me. When I was about to leave, my mother called and asked me to babysit my little brother. I sighed and put my regular clothes back on.

Answer 1

Just as I was about to leave for a party,my mom asked me to babysit my little brother does when I sighed and put my stuff on

Answer 2

Last night, as I prepared for a costume party, I carefully donned my outfit. First, I slipped into my tights, then elegantly slipped into my dress. Following that, I gracefully draped my cape over my shoulders and secured my mask in place. As I gazed into the mirror, a character from my favorite comic movie gazed back at me, and a smile crept across my face.

Just as I was about to head out, my mother's voice echoed through the house. She requested that I babysit my little brother. A deep sigh escaped my lips, and with reluctance, I shed my costume, returning to my ordinary attire.