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L 4.3.2 Quiz: Understand Audience Sensitivity

Read this sentence:
Because I am very interested in the position you have
available at your company, would like to schedule an
interview with you.
What is wrong with the sentence?
OA. The sentence is grammatically incorrect.
OB. The sentence uses an informal style.
C. The sentence contains several spelling mistakes.
D. The sentence uses an unprofessional tone.
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Final answer:

The sentence contains an error in grammar and lacks proper punctuation. It should be revised to be grammatically correct and professionally worded.


Step-by-step explanation:

The sentence contains an error in grammar. The correct sentence would be:

I am very interested in the position you have available at your company and would like to schedule an interview with you.

In the original sentence, the conjunction 'because' is used incorrectly. It should be replaced with 'and' to connect the two clauses properly. The sentence also lacks proper punctuation, which contributes to its grammatical incorrectness. By making these changes, the sentence becomes grammatically correct and professionally worded.


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