Question

1. Lucia wanted to add a descriptive touch detail to this sentence from a previous draft. Which sentence BEST adds touch detail to her sentence?

I sat on my bed with my back against the pillows to watch ZeldaZee.
A. I inhaled the comforting scent of laundry detergent as I began watching ZeldaZee.
B. With my back nestled against a mound of soft pillows and my computer warming my legs, I clicked play on the latest ZeldaZee video.
C. With the salty, buttery taste of popcorn and the crisp taste of fizzy water mingling on my tongue, I clicked play on the latest ZeldaZee video.
D. I sat on my bed with my back against the pillow, allowing the silence of my house to be filled with the sound of ZeldaZee's voice and perfectly-timed
background music.

Answer 1

Option B adds the best touch detail to the original sentence.

Step-by-step explanation:

The sentence that BEST adds touch detail to the original sentence is option B. It provides a vivid description of the setting by mentioning the soft pillows, the warm computer, and the action of clicking play on the latest ZeldaZee video.

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