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Read this run-on sentence:

She went to the zoo she wanted to see the giraffe.
What is one correct way to rewrite the sentence?
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She went to the zoo because she wanted to see the giraffe.
She went to the zoo: she wanted to see the giraffe.
She went to the zoo but, she wanted to see the giraffe.
She went to the zoo; She wanted to see the giraffe.

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Final answer:

One correct way to rewrite the run-on sentence is by adding the conjunction 'because' to make the connection between the actions clearer.


Step-by-step explanation:

One correct way to rewrite the run-on sentence 'She went to the zoo she wanted to see the giraffe' is:

  1. She went to the zoo because she wanted to see the giraffe.
This revision adds a conjunction and makes the connection between going to the zoo and wanting to see the giraffe clearer.

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