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On Monday, the City Council created a new program to encourage citizens to recycle. This clever, cutting edge program will help to put our city on the map. Some difficult citizens, who do not appreciate the environment, will probably try to boycott the program.

Myra wants to add the underline sentence so that they use objective language.

Which revision accomplishes this?(1 Point)

This program aims to draw attention to our city. Some citizens would likely try to boycott the program.

This program will draw much needed attention to our city. Some citizens will try to boycott the program.

this intelligent and innovative program will draw attention to our city. Some citizens will try to boycott the program.

This program will draw attention to our city. Some citizens may be difficult to convince and will try to boycott the program.

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Final answer:

The most objective sentence revision Myra can choose is the one that states the program will draw attention to the city and neutrally acknowledges that some citizens may try to boycott it, without using subjective language.

Step-by-step explanation:

To revise the sentence so that Myra uses objective language, she should choose the option that avoids subjective descriptors and potential biases. The most objective version among the provided choices is: "This program will draw attention to our city. Some citizens may be difficult to convince and will try to boycott the program." This version omits any subjective adjectives like 'clever', 'cutting edge', or 'difficult' and refrains from assuming the actions or intentions of the citizens who may oppose the program.

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