Answer:
Hello! There are a few minor errors and some awkward phrasing in your text, but overall, it's understandable. Here are some suggestions to improve the clarity and fluency of your text:
In the first sentence, it should be "We are the mayors of Mesquite" instead of "we are mayors of Mesquite."
In the second sentence, it would be clearer to say "In this presentation, we will show you the main problems that our city faced five years ago and how we made it more attractive and welcoming for tourists, while also improving the well-being of the inhabitants."
In the third sentence, instead of saying "Mesquite had many drawbacks, but she had some perks too," it would be more direct to say "Mesquite had both advantages and disadvantages."
In the fourth sentence, instead of saying "she had a dilapidated casino," it would be better to say "the casino was run-down and in need of repair."
In the fifth sentence, instead of saying "as there were too few shops and entertainments," it would be more natural to say "due to a lack of shops and entertainment options."
In the sixth sentence, instead of saying "First of all, we wanted to attract tourists, and especially the gentry so as to repopulate our city," it would be clearer to say "Our first priority was to attract tourists, especially those with higher incomes, in order to revitalize our city."
In the seventh sentence, instead of saying "since the Eureka Casino was renovated, there were more people who have started moving to Mesquite," it would be more accurate to say "since the renovation of the Eureka Casino, more people have started to move to Mesquite, primarily tourists who are attracted to the city's vibrant atmosphere."
In the eighth sentence, instead of saying "After this, more people wanted moving to our city," it would be better to say "As a result, more people wanted to move to our city."
In the ninth sentence, instead of saying "rents go sky high," it would be more natural to say "rents skyrocketed."
In the tenth sentence, instead of saying "it’s obvious that we wanted to attract affluent people, but we did not want to displace people," it would be clearer to say "While our goal was to attract wealthier residents, we did not want to displace existing residents."
In the eleventh sentence, instead of saying "Therefore, thanks to the money generated by the casino and the economic growth, we developed more city dwellings so as to accommodate everyone, put more people on less space, and limit the urban sprawl," it would be clearer to say "Therefore, we used the revenue generated by the casino and economic growth to develop more housing options that could accommodate a growing population while also limiting urban sprawl."
In the twelfth sentence, instead of saying "So, we had entertainment, and more people, the last thing we needed was to make Mesquite attractive," it would be more natural to say "With a growing population and more entertainment options, our next priority was to make Mesquite a more attractive place to live and visit."
In the thirteenth sentence, instead of saying "We invested in amenities like shops, barbershops, restaurants, or bike-sharing system," it would be clearer to say "We invested in amenities such as shops, barbershops, restaurants, and a bike-sharing system."
In the fourteenth sentence, instead of saying "decorated the place with some trees in the district which are appreciated by the bulk of the population," it would be better to say "planted trees throughout the city, which are appreciated by many residents."
Instead of "For 5 years," you can say "Over the past 5 years," to make the sentence flow better.
Instead of "attract a lot of sightseers," you can say "attract many tourists," which is a more commonly used phrase.
So the revised text would be:
"Since we had other conveniences, new kinds of people have started moving to Mesquite. Over the past 5 years, we have worked together to improve the living conditions of the inhabitants and attract many tourists, which has made our city more welcoming and vibrant than before."