I'd like to get a job there because I like digging around and planting things. Which revision changes the tone of this sentence from informal to formal?
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A I'm looking for a yardwork job because I like working outside. I'm looking for a yardwork job because I like working outside. B I am seeking employment that will allow me to explore my horticulture interests. I am seeking employment that will allow me to explore my horticulture interests. C I want a job there so I can mess around outdoors in gardens. I want a job there so I can mess around outdoors in gardens. D I am requesting a job that will let me plant things and work in folks' yards