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Lina is assigned to write an essay about violence on TV. After doing some research, Lina decides to write about the violence in cartoons. Lina specifically wants to write about cartoon violence and how it affects children who watch cartoons. Which of the following would be the best thesis for Lina's essay?

A. One problem with cartoons is that characters make fun of each other.

B. Children who watch a lot of cartoons are more likely to behave badly.

C. Cartoons shown at night are worse than cartoons shown during the day.

D. Watching too much television takes away from important study time.​

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I would say B. Then she could touch down on how the violence in the cartoon and effect behaviour.
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Answer:

B. Children who watch a lot of cartoons are more likely to behave badly.

This thesis statement directly addresses Lina's topic of interest - cartoon violence and its impact on children. It takes a clear stance on the issue and presents a specific argument that Lina can develop in her essay. Additionally, it is a debatable statement that invites further discussion and exploration of the topic.

The other options, A, C, and D, are not directly related to Lina's topic of interest or do not present a clear argument for her to develop in her essay.

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