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he Activity: Errors of style identify, explain and correct the errors of style in hese sentences: 1 Although her mother was in it, thieves stole a suitcase containing money and jewellery from the car of Mrs Hester Williams yesterday.​

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There is an error of style in the sentence "Although her mother was in it, thieves stole a suitcase containing money and jewellery from the car of Mrs Hester Williams yesterday." The sentence should read "Although her mother was in it, thieves stole a suitcase containing money and jewelry from Mrs. Hester Williams' car yesterday." The error is that the word "jewellery" should be spelled as "jewelry".

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