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Thesis Statement Worksheet

Directions: For each of the following statements, identify whether the statement is strong or
weak (too narrow, or too broad). If the statement is weak, rewrite it to fix the problem.

1. Media violence is harmful to society.

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Answer:

Weak (too broad). It is too general and does not specify which types of media, what kind of harm, and to which segment of society.

Rewritten: The portrayal of violent behavior in movies and TV shows has a negative impact on children's behavior.

Step-by-step explanation:

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