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Can read this to see if it is good or not? Have you ever learned lessons through challenges? In the story, A Raisin in the Sun, by Lorraine Hansberry discusses the family goes through many challenges. A character named Walter changes through the book because of these obstacles. He develops and learns from these problems and becomes a leader or the head of the family. At the beginning Walter was childish, but by the end of the play, Walter was able to develop Values that helped him become the head of the family.

When Walter questions Mama's "Business" he is trying to show that he is at the top of the family. He is furiously waiting for Mama's answer. The text states "(Bringing his fists down and shouting) Mama, you didn’t go do something with that insurance money, something crazy?" (Scene II, Act I, Line 171) This shows Walter is trying to question Mama to make sure that she did not waste the money. Walter wants Mama to tell him where she went so he can be the head of the house that they moved into. so that is why Walter is ask his mom where she went and what she did. Body paragraph 1 Walter is trying to say that he wants to be ahead of the family he wants to be the man in the house.

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Overall, the content of the paragraph appears to be addressing the topic of Walter's character development in the play A Raisin in the Sun. The paragraph mentions how Walter changes throughout the play and becomes the head of the family. The specific example of Walter questioning Mama's "business" is used to support this idea.

The paragraph could benefit from some improvements in terms of structure and clarity. For instance, the topic sentence could be more specific in outlining the main idea of the paragraph. It could also be useful to provide more contextual information and quotes from the text to support the analysis of Walter's character development.

Additionally, the last sentence of the paragraph appears to be incomplete and unclear. It could be rephrased or expanded to more clearly convey the intended meaning.

Overall, with some revisions and expansion, the paragraph has the potential to contribute to a thoughtful analysis of Walter's character development in the play.
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