Question

Here is the second part of my work, please let me know you views on it, and any improvement possible. ​

Answer 1

I like the second part of the poem much better than the first.. it’s smoother and easier to read

Answer 2

Step-by-step explanation:

The second stanza could be like this:

All there was were feuds and duels

As we were different from the start

You were following your own rules

And I did what came to my heart

Still a beautiful poem though