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Rewrite these topic sentences so that they are clear and focured rather than fuzzy or too broad His The movie's special effects were incredible .3. The memorial day celebration bạn than was more than than fun before 3. The evening with her parent was an an unforgettable experience



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Answer: Hello! I am not sure if this question has an exact answer. But I hope you get an idea.

Explanation: 1. The special effects in the movie were truly remarkable.

2. The Memorial Day celebration was exceptionally enjoyable.

3. Spending the evening with her parents was a remarkable and unforgettable experience.

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