Question

I need some spanish grammar help! The paragraph below needs to be revised. Base the revisions off of what my teacher said, in the attached screenshot. The writing prompt was to talk about what I did last week. Thank you!

La semana pasada, el lunes, paseé a mi perro. El martes monté a caballo. Fui de excursión en las montañas el miércoles. El jueves hice las tareas domésticas. El viernes fui a pescar.

Answer 1

La semana pasada, el lunes, saqué a pasear a mi perro. El martes monté a caballo. Caminé en las montañas el miércoles. El jueves trabajé en la casa. El viernes pesqué.

Step-by-step explanation:

"Last week, Monday, I walked my dog. On Tuesday I rode a horse. I hiked in the mountains on Wednesday. On Thursday, I worked around the house. On Friday I fished."

Instead of using the verbs "Fui" (I went) and "hice" (I did), word it so it does not require those verbs to get the same meaning across! For example: "Fui compras la ropas en el centro comercial" (I went shopping for clothes at the mall) changes to "Yo compró la ropas en el central comercial" (I shopped for clothes at the mall).

Hopefully this makes sense and can help you learn a bit more about Spanish!