Question

I needs yalls opinion on this poem

If I could crawl inside your head I would
oh these secrets that you keep
Can you see me here?
Feel me?
Scurrying inside the files of your mind.

Oh, sweet manipulative honey drown me in your illusions
one million locks you master of deception
your lies wash over me like a warm ocean tide
comforting and homely oh sweet love feed me false truths
like poisonous grapes on a vine
I crave your perjurious bones
encompass my naive skin
transport me to your ecstasy of distortion
for shall I live and breathe and bathe here?
How could you?
What did you do?
Look at me when I'm speaking
You've been cheating and sneaking
Going behind my back and creeping
You've broken my heart and crushed
My soul
where's the sorry
you're so cold
I gave you everything
I changed my whole life for a tool
There you go again treating me like a fool
Who is this girl
Was she good
I bet it was fun wearing the hood
Look at your face all red and flushed
I'm screaming and crying
My world is crushed
You’re silent what a surprise
Watch my temperature rise
I'm disappointed in your lack of love
We both were perfect we fit like a glove
Deception is hard to swallow
The man you wanted to marry is causing
Your sorrow the walls are caving in
Wishing he had not sinned
But it's too late to contemplate
He should've thought of that before he
Slept with a cheap skate
I throw his clothes into a bag and order
Him out to be with that hag
I slam the door shut and fall to the floor
Feeling heartbroken once more
You said I was your world but then I realized
I'm just one planet in your universe
I wish I never met you I wish I didn't care
I wish I never said I loved you or that I'd always be there
You used me you were selfish
you abused me and made me feel anxious
You left the worst scars possible
the ones that aren't traceable
Now I'm left frustrated
because you were never worth it
you left me broken
I feel so worthless
you never loved me
you never cared you spat right in my Face
and everything we’ve ever shared you lied
you deceived but worst of all
You didn't just leave
you could’ve saved me the misery and the insecurities
that were caused By your infinity
You know sometimes
you can love someone so much that you are blind.
You know they're cheating and you know they're lying.
You think the love is strong
that it couldn't be true,
but still,
it's happening to you.
Well let me explain to you what I'm saying is true.
His lips are so soft when they touch you, you’re at ease,
never realize that those same lips someone else please
his hands touch you softly as he blows in your ear
you never know that he does the same thing to someone else
to ease away there fears
in his mind he's caressing her
while he is caressing you
saying he loves you but he tells her that too
having a man that lies and cheats is a hurtful
and dangerous thing to go through
I hope this doesn't happen to any of you

Answer 1

This poem is a powerful expression of heartbreak and betrayal. The speaker is feeling hurt and angry after being deceived by a partner who was unfaithful. The poem paints a vivid picture of the speaker's emotions and the pain caused by the situation. The use of imagery and metaphor is particularly effective in conveying the depth of the speaker's feelings.

Overall, the poem is a raw and emotional outpouring of the speaker's experiences and a reminder that infidelity can have devastating consequences on those affected. The message of the poem is a warning to others to be cautious of who they trust and to protect themselves from being hurt in similar ways.