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Read the following sentence and identify the editing suggestion that would be the most helpful.

High school students should have more electives to choose from and be given more hands-on job-skills-related courses. However, courses like cooking, welding, and car maintenance would increase student interest in school.

Add more examples of electives that should be added.
Change the transition "however" to "in addition."
Make the first sentence two sentences.
Change the example of welding to English.

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Answer:

"however" to "for example"

Step-by-step explanation:

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