Read the sentences from a student's essay about "The Treasure of Lemon Brown." The thugs say that they don't wish to harm Lemon Brown. But they plan to attack him, showing that their greed is more powerful

Read the sentences from a student's essay about "The Treasure of Lemon Brown." The thugs say that they don't wish to harm Lemon Brown. But they plan to attack him, showing that their greed is more powerful than their humanity. What is the best way to revise the last sentence? change "But they plan " to "However, they still plan" change "But they plan" to "In conclusion, they plan" change "But they plan" to "Finally, they still plan" change "But they plan" to "Then they plan"

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