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What is wrong with this sentence and why? My colleagues supported my proposal for two reasons first,it is practical,and second,it’s simplicity

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it's simple not simplicity

Step-by-step explanation:

The grammar is pretty bad, there are way too many commas/ not where they need to be, the spaces aren't spaced out properly, I could go on. but this sentence takes place in past tense not present by taking the ly of the simplicity you make it proper grammar (I'm bad at explaining things but I hope this helps - a grammar nerd)

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